How do I know? I don't need to listen to the weather forecast. Susanna Leonard Hill told me it's here!
If you don't follow Perfect Picture Book Fridays, you should. Not just for the great picture book reviews, but also because Susanna shares fun writing contests for pitches and short stories. Today is the kick-off (I know, imagery for the wrong season)--okay today is the first pitch (but that could be confused with a writing pitch)--today a new challenge SPRINGS forth, hosted on Susanna's blog. Can you tell I'm giddy with excitement?
public domain image by Vera Kratochvil |
So here is, drum roll please: THE THREE WIGGLY WORMS BLUFF
THE THREE WIGGLY WORMS BLUFF
“Melting snow is swamping the soil!
Time to head to higher ground,” said Papa Worm.
Papa, Mama and Baby Worm squirmed
to the surface and wiggled up the grassy slope to face—
the dreaded sidewalk.
“Ow! It’s rough,” said Baby.
“Go as fast as you can.” Mama gave
him a pat. “And keep a lookout for birds.”
Baby wiggled as fast as he could.
But he was only halfway across when
a robin swooped down.
“I’m going to gobble you up and
take you to my babies!” the robin squawked.
“I’m a baby myself. Barely a bite,
and not worth your flight. Mama is coming, she’s more than a morsel. Why don’t
you wait for her?” said Baby.
The robin thanked Baby and sent him
on his way.
When the coast looked clear, Mama
wiggled as fast as she could.
But she was barely halfway across
when the robin hopped out from a bush.
“I’m going to gobble you up and
take you to my babies!” the robin squawked.
“I’d make an adequate dinner, but
if you want to treat your babies to a feast you might want to wait for Papa
worm. He’s coming next,” said Mama.
The robin thanked Mama and sent her
on her way.
Papa did calisthenics, warming up
his wiggle. Between the birds and the pavement heating up, He needed to be fast!
Papa wasn’t halfway across when the
robin landed in his path.
“I’m going to gobble you up and
take you to my babies!” the robin squawked. “You are plump perfection!”
“Is it true that the early bird
gets the worm?” asked Papa.
“That’s true.” The robin opened
wide.
“Stop! How do I know you’re the early bird? Maybe someone
else is supposed to eat me,” said Papa.
A second bird saw its chance. “I was here first.”
“No, you weren’t!” the robin
screeched.
“I’m the early bird!” they both
insisted.
The two birds went beak to beak,
pecking and pulling feathers.
While the birds quarreled, Papa wiggled,
across the concrete and—Ploop!—down
a hole in the grass.
“No worm for the early bird today.”
Papa hugged his family.
They wiggled down to enjoy their damp,
but not flooded, springtime home. . .
until summer heat baked the soil
and they had to return across the sidewalk again.
For those of you who are counting-that's 383 words! Welcome to Spring. :))
What a clever and fun twist on the fairy tale! Well done, Wendy!
ReplyDeleteThanks, Cheryl. I always enjoy reading the entries for Susanna's contests.
DeleteYou had me at the title. Fun!
ReplyDeleteOoh, thank you! The title came to me first and I knew I had to write their story.
DeleteI like the spring time tie in with this story and how papa worm used quick thinking to get out of trouble. Great job!
ReplyDeletePapa worm's action and the response is the "hint" to the second fairy tale I poached and twisted!
DeleteAbsolutely fabulous, Wendy! I love this! A clever twist, very kid-friendly, tons of fun all around! But I confess... I'm having a little trouble guessing the second fairy tale! The Three Billy Goats Gruff is clear... but is the other Goldilocks? (For Papa, Mama and Baby?) Or something else I'm not remembering...? Either way, it's a great story, and thanks so much for joining in the Springtime Madness :)
ReplyDeleteShould I give it away? Shh. Don't read on if you don't want to know. Am I the only Valiant Tailor fan? I always admired how he got the others to turn on themselves. So there it is.
DeleteHaha! I love your outsmarting worms! Good luck!
ReplyDeleteThanks, Julie. Worms everywhere appreciate your support (me too!)
DeleteThis is fantastic - very, very clever.
ReplyDeleteAppreciate the support.
DeleteVery cute Wendy! I love how you incorporated two fairy tales - creative! I am a big fan of worms so love how they triumphed. I'm off to write mine now!
ReplyDeleteGood luck, Leslie! I haven't had time to read them all but the ones I've read are springtime fun and funny.
DeleteWendy, Wonderful! Especially on this first day of spring!
ReplyDeleteThanks, Pat. It doesn't mean automatic sunshine and warmth, but the day does feel special!
DeleteSo clever, Wendy...worms...who would have thunk it. :)
ReplyDeleteAnd what a great solution Papa came up with...a fast talker, if not that fast a walker.:) Great job...isn't spring wonderful...and Susanna...and reading all of these amazing stories.:) :)
Brilliant! Smartest worms ever!
ReplyDeleteI cannot wait to actually see the worms come out! So glad Papa Worm decided to use his noodle to outsmart those two birdbrains!
ReplyDeleteThis was really fun. I loved that Papa Worm outsmarted the birds:)
ReplyDeleteI love the humor in this!
ReplyDeletePapa is one clever worm :)
ReplyDeleteoh what a good chuckle, clever worm family. :)
ReplyDeleteThis makes me like worms just a little bit more. ;)
ReplyDeleteCute story!
Oh that's hilarious, Wendy! We'll done.
ReplyDeleteYay for clever Papa Worm! Lots of fun and kid-friendly. I confess I haven't heard of the Valiant Tailor.
ReplyDeleteWonderful! This is AWESOME!!! :D
ReplyDeleteVery clever. I love your word choices, especially ploop. I've filed that away. 8~)
ReplyDeleteThanks, Steve! Many happy ploops to you!
ReplyDeleteCute story, Wendy. I love how Papa worm outsmarts the birds.
ReplyDeleteThose are some wise worms! Such fun!
ReplyDeleteThe idea of Papa Worm doing calisthenics cracks me up! Cute story!
ReplyDeleteHi Wendy, this is funny! I like your smart worms.
ReplyDeleteWonderful Wendy. It's fun and rhythmic. The ending reminded me a little of the quarreling tigers at the end of Little Black Sambo.
ReplyDeleteOh, Wendy that's great! Did you know papa had the early bird excuse at the start or did it miraculously hit you one day?
ReplyDeleteHow fun!
ReplyDeleteI could clearly picture the illustrations for this story, Wendy. Well done!
ReplyDeleteWendy, I just voted for yours over on Susanna's site. Then I decided I HAD to know who wrote it. I'm glad I figured it out! It is a great story, esp. the clever ending! Fingers crossed for a win for you.
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